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DW Ch13 P35

Cloaker is 1000% still trying to think of ways to push the captain into the sea.

I made some minor edits to last week's page and it's much better to read. Go back and take a look. There's a better flow to the scene and it ends with a better punchline.

2 thoughts on “DW Ch13 P35

  1. oooooooooooooooooooh
    there’s so much more to him just being a pirate. i love this!!! also i checked the previous page hehe

    also did i mention i love the pirates’ designs? love blue haired characters!!

    1. Thanks. While I was working on the original script, some beta readers suggested that the pirates get their own spin-off. I would be fun, but who knows if I’ll have the time.
      Also, in the drafts, all the pirates had different hair color, but they didn’t look enough like sea serpents, so I modified them.

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